Jackie Chan CAN get away!
Created on: July 4th, 2007
Jackie can run away, he just needs to learn how to manipulate the ghosts.
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i have to agree... at least one more loop of running, if not two... it's still abrupt, but you get a good set-up before the punch of the turn-around... as it is now it's a pinch of set up and a pound of punchline; jokes don't work well that way. the general rule is a ratio of 3 to 1, in favor of set-up. i think this is a great parody of the original, and i'd like to see the joke reach its full potential. IMO two full loops of the running before the turn-around and escape. Please!
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