Very good, but any chance you could change it so that he moves with the grass, since the camera is panning and he's just sliding along the ground? It looks a bit off.
I'm 17, so I'd say 15 is generally in "hittable" range, but when they edit her to make her look younger, that should make her LESS attractive, not moreso. Perverts scare me. =(
Okay now that I've finished laughing...why you were 5'd. This was so beautifully simple, and the punchline was so great in how it catches you off guard. Well done.
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