well i know what it wasn't, it wasn't your moms face!

oh wow, i changed my mind. did both myself and it pretty much sucked completely. keep it the way it is.

cut out the line after that out completely

yeah i went through all those comments on the original, and saw that you were doing this. good job, except that its better slow, and also i think that the NOOOOOOOOOO on to of thje song kinda sucked. you could just add it after "I just wanna scream" and

im neutral to the speeding it up or the adding a "NOOOO!" idea, id say you've already got enough people who love it. dont risk f*cking it up.

haha i love it

hehe, good, but not great.