DOOM Fanfiction Redux
Created on: February 23rd, 2008
DOOM Fanfiction Redux
A fantastic DOOM fan fiction made better (worse) by the stylings of some jackass named CaptainComedy, AKA Omochaosucks.

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706 http://www.reddit.com/r/gaming/comments/e2kpb/fps_storytelling_then_and_now/
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?DOOM: Repercussions of Evil by Orlics
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February 23rd, 2008
(66)
NO, JOHN. YOU ARE THE DEMONS.
February 23rd, 2008
(11)
This is pretty cool. I like that way you produced this - 5 star
February 24th, 2008
(3)
He gotted the gun and fired at what he thought was demons. John didn't like those demons.
February 24th, 2008
(8)
And then.... John was a zombie.
February 24th, 2008
(6)
ah, you spoiled it
February 24th, 2008
(1)
YOU WILL BE KILL BY DEMONS
February 24th, 2008
(1)
The ending sealed it for me. Puts it so bluntly... 'And then John was was a zombie' lmfao.
February 24th, 2008
(-1)
I want to be on the FAV'D 5*OMGWIN daddy!
February 24th, 2008
(1)
now do http://mgsfanfic.ytmnd.com/ or http://fanficofthelegendary.ytmnd.com/ for even more ultimate win.
February 24th, 2008
(0)
EXPLOSIONED A FLAME
February 24th, 2008
(21)
M. Night Shyamalan should be jealous of your twist
February 24th, 2008
(1)
lol "oldered"
February 25th, 2008
(2)
"John gotted his palsma rifle" did it for me.
February 25th, 2008
(2)
the radio crackered
February 26th, 2008
(2)
HES GOING TO KILL US!!!!
February 26th, 2008
(2)
HES GOING TO KILL US!!!!
February 28th, 2008
(2)
HES GOING TO KILL US!!!!
February 28th, 2008
(2)
HES GOING TO KILL US!!!!
February 28th, 2008
(3)
I smell a huge motion Sci-fi original movie in the making!!!
March 2nd, 2008
(0)
VISIT NOJOHN.YTMND.com , i have created JOHN!!!! lol
July 13th, 2008
(0)
I WILL SHOOT AT HIM!
September 2nd, 2009
(0)
C-C-C-COMBO BREAKER!!!!
February 23rd, 2008
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Yeah, this is totally preferable to going to the site and reading it myself. F*g.
February 23rd, 2008
(53)
Protip: To defeat the Cyberdemon, shoot at it untill it dies.
February 24th, 2008
(6)
YOU...ARE HUGE! THAT MEANS YOU HAVE HUGE GUTS! RIP AND TEAR....
February 29th, 2008
(0)
berserker pack-gone, feelings of invincibility-over.
February 23rd, 2008
(3)
i enjoyed this better than the dramatic reading....this was bad ass!!!
February 23rd, 2008
(0)
thanks :D
February 24th, 2008
(0)
Agreed, the other one does not even come close -- Its a good effort but not even close
February 24th, 2008
(0)
That was great man, 1000x better with sound effects and whatnot. Looks like you put alot of effort into it :D
February 23rd, 2008
(23)
Dad said "No! you will BE KILL BY DEMONS!"
February 24th, 2008
(12)
My dad says that every time I tell him what I want to do for the weekend. :(
February 29th, 2008
(2)
"WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA" "There was a time... when he believed him."
March 3rd, 2008
(-1)
That what he said last time i wanted to go to Ravenhold XD
February 23rd, 2008
(11)
I was going to 1 this, but listened to the entire thing... and the end... OH THE END. OHHHHH.
February 23rd, 2008
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8=========D~~~~ ):
February 23rd, 2008
(10)
This needs to be made into a movie.
February 24th, 2008
(6)
I gotta take a dump
February 23rd, 2008
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I cried so hard that I *think* I may have weed a little.
February 23rd, 2008
(21)
This pushes the whole dramatic reading fad to a whole new level. Extremely well done.
February 23rd, 2008
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Epically old and you didn't even crop out the sh*tty "motivation" at the bottom. :c
February 23rd, 2008
(11)
i cant read and im deaf, 1.
February 23rd, 2008
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fixed the stupid title on the bottom
February 24th, 2008
(0)
HE GOING TO KILL USSSSSS!
February 24th, 2008
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NO, JOHN. YOU ARE THE DEMONS.
February 24th, 2008
(25)
Was this the first draft to the movie Doom?
March 11th, 2008
(0)
bravo
February 24th, 2008
(3)
Nice audio.
February 24th, 2008
(2)
You sir, are made of epic win! Audio rocks!
February 24th, 2008
(1)
lawl
February 24th, 2008
(1)
I liked the Lost flashback sound effects.
February 24th, 2008
(4)
Fan fiction reading sites have just set to a very high standard.
February 24th, 2008
(6)
Wow, just wow. This takes dramatic reading to a whole new level. Bravo sir, for raising the bar.
February 24th, 2008
(4)
5 for Ravenholm.
February 24th, 2008
(6)
we don't go there anymore...
February 26th, 2008
(5)
Lando does
February 28th, 2008
(0)
thats why, he controls the zombies. maybe I'll write a Resident Lando fanfic lol. more family guy comin' up
February 24th, 2008
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you is the demons
February 24th, 2008
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wow,
February 24th, 2008
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February 24th, 2008
(0)
Best reading ever.
February 24th, 2008
(3)
you have raised the bar, my friend
February 24th, 2008
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And then John was a F*GGOT!!
February 24th, 2008
(1)
rivals lafontaine
February 24th, 2008
(0)
Logged in just to 5* this site. Epic reading of a classic fan fic. My only complaint is his portrayal of the last line...I've always imagined the emphasis going on "You" rather than "are", and said in more of a whisper than a shout.
February 24th, 2008
(1)
NO JOHN YOU ARE THE DEMONS
February 24th, 2008
(0)
And then, this site was voted 5.
February 24th, 2008
(7)
NO...you will be kill by deemooonns. DaaddAAAAHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
February 24th, 2008
(4)
That random scream at the end makes me laugh EVERY time.
February 24th, 2008
(0)
He tried to blew the base up.
February 24th, 2008
(0)
Where is a BFG9000 when you need one?
February 24th, 2008
(2)
Where is it? It's OVER 9000!!
February 24th, 2008
(4)
Epic plot twist is epic.
February 25th, 2008
(0)
DUMBLED00R IS NOT.
February 24th, 2008
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http://fanfiction.ytmnd.com/ The old one is funnier
February 24th, 2008
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Jesus Christ waited. The halo above him blinked and sparked out of the air. There was sin in the world. He didn't see it, but had expected it now for years. His warnings to his 12 disciples were not listenend to and now it was too late. Far too late for now, anyway. Jesus had been a Messiah for thirty-three years. When he was young he taught in the temple and he said to God "I want to be th Saviour daddy" God said "No! You will BE CRUCIFIED BY ROMANS" There was a time when he believed him. Then as he got oldered he stopped. But now in Jerusalem he knew there was sins. "This is my beloved Son" God crackered. "In who I am well pleased!" So Jesus gotted the Holy Spirit and performed miracles. "HE GOING TO SAVE US" said the disciples "We will crucify him" said the Pharisees and took him to pilate. But then Pilate found no fault with him and was not able to kill. "We must kill him for blaspheming God" the Jews shouted. Jesus said "N
February 24th, 2008
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"No, Jews. I am the Son of God." And then Jesus was crucified.
February 24th, 2008
(0)
i was into it. i want more.
February 24th, 2008
(0)
NO JOHN! YOU NEED TO MAKE MORE OF THESE!
February 24th, 2008
(0)
that was amazing- i want to hear more
February 24th, 2008
(0)
beautifully simple -and- simply beautiful
February 24th, 2008
(0)
the more immersive and dramatic the reading, the more lolworthy the typos/grammar -- this was amazing...
February 24th, 2008
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I'm getting pretty tired of these dramatic readings, but have to give you props for the production values. But then I checked your sources and saw you remade a site instead of finding your own material.
February 24th, 2008
(1)
you gotted a 5.
February 24th, 2008
(1)
Nice sound effects
February 25th, 2008
(-1)
I dunno who did the first one but I did the second one. Because this guys a tool box.
March 11th, 2008
(0)
gr33n you spelled "fap" wrong, lololol
February 24th, 2008
(3)
the kid who made this is 6 years older now
February 24th, 2008
(3)
Making him 12?
February 26th, 2008
(0)
maybe, but i doubt his mental age has reached double figures
February 24th, 2008
(2)
This is so freaking epic! I would pay money to have someone edit a fanfic with those kinds of production values. SATAN GUIDE MY C*CK!!! It reminded me a lot of Resident Evil 4, actually. Sounded like Leon.
February 24th, 2008
(-1)
OMFG PLOT TWIST
February 24th, 2008
(3)
lol its like the Sixth Sense
February 25th, 2008
(5)
He was the demons all along
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ROFLROFROFL
February 24th, 2008
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what a sh*tty ending, they had me sold at start.
February 24th, 2008
(0)
I don't know, as far as Peter Chimera works go, this one makes the most sense.
March 8th, 2008
(0)
oh no fourest's "ytmnd.com/users/Wintersun my very first alt : )" comment got downvoted and hidden which obscures the point of my existence to a greater extent than it already was
April 8th, 2008
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I'm probably going to just make another account because "wintersun" is the most retarded name ever gfasdffdasdfadfasdfas
February 24th, 2008
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wtf does doom mean, is that a video game or somethin lol
February 24th, 2008
(0)
Uncanny. Took me a second listen to hear the Lost flashback SFX.
February 24th, 2008
(0)
Executed perfectly. If only it were longer :(
February 24th, 2008
(1)
Awesome voice acting!!
February 24th, 2008
(0)
that's a f*ckin sexy voice no homo
February 24th, 2008
(1)
Damnit. I hate when I get plasmaed by the palsma rifle.
February 24th, 2008
(0)
Classic.
February 24th, 2008
(0)
I don't care if you saw it somewhere else. Very orginal and well produced!
February 24th, 2008
(0)
lmfao!
February 24th, 2008
(0)
I came... I lol'd... I 5'd.
February 24th, 2008
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I don't care.
February 24th, 2008
(1)
palsma
February 24th, 2008
(0)
2nd
February 24th, 2008
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Really, at the end of the day, we all are the demons.
February 24th, 2008
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The more i hear this fan fic the more i think it is a pinnical of english literature. The epic words "You are the demons." Maybe this means that he is fighting with the inner demons of his past caused by the traumatic experience past of growing up with his father. And that the demons within the base are all manifestations of the torment within his soul. Still doesn't explain why he was a zombie though. lol
February 24th, 2008
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Demons! Thats what we learnt bout in church today. If you don't touch the bible and an echidna with a snake tattoo YOU WILL BE A ZOMBIE or A DEMON. Its a choice, like marrying men, and if you make it, you will gain ultimate power. Now, when I was in Atlanta, I had me some jack daniels which is a odd thing given that I weren't in Tenneessee at the time. Did you know its from thar? I bet you did not. In conclusion, this site is a great warnin to all the young rascals out there. 5 starz.
February 24th, 2008
(0)
Oh man this is just plain awesome. Your voice and the music have transformed this into something truly magical. Anyone who ever does something like this should take a lesson from you.
February 24th, 2008
(0)
it almost sucked until the end.
February 24th, 2008
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Under the Baumen Leters, this is the most classy and dramatic reading.
February 24th, 2008
(0)
If this isn't a sign of the apocalypse I don't know what is... Buts its ok because... I am a zombie! LOLZ!
February 24th, 2008
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good job putting bullsh*t half life 2 sounds into a DOOM related ytmnd, dumb f*ggot
February 24th, 2008
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palsma rifle against zombies ? even a crowbar is more powerful.
February 24th, 2008
(0)
That was good... A little too good, in fact.
February 24th, 2008
(0)
You're getting good at this sh*t.
February 24th, 2008
(-1)
really good. do another!
February 24th, 2008
(3)
Nice use of HL2 sound effects.
February 25th, 2008
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wrong f*ggot
February 25th, 2008
(1)
... prolly cuz u never played it. Ever tried a silent level like Lost Coast? When you hear the crackle on the combine radios it sounds EXACTLY like the radio/crackle effects the guy added for the clip here. I hope you get a headcrab on your crotch cuz that's the closest you'll get to having your dick sucked; thanks. Now go masturbate to Miley Cyrus.
February 25th, 2008
(0)
Worse still, you can CLEARLY hear the half-life zombies in the background.
February 25th, 2008
(2)
Maybe I was using them ironically, to see how many people would point it out and call me gay. Just a thought.
February 26th, 2008
(1)
Nothing gay with using the effects, it was a nice touch, which is why I gave you five. When I said "worse still", I meant it in the sense of "further supporting my point".
February 26th, 2008
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nah, you used them because every f*cking loser who likes sh*tty games adores trash like half-life 2, so you figured by using sounds from such a lauded game you'd garner some extra f*g points with your audience.
February 28th, 2008
(0)
Stopping by to call you gay... you're gay.
March 1st, 2008
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Murdar, show me a good video game. Give me the name of one shooter that has good story and great gameplay.
March 11th, 2008
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dont bash on Murdar cause he likes RuneScape
December 10th, 2008
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Deus Ex
February 24th, 2008
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Demons voices sounded like The Darkness from the game voiced by Mike Patton
February 24th, 2008
(0)
That was great
February 24th, 2008
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At last someone who knows how to do a dramatic reading. When the first few background edits came in I knew this was going to be good.
February 24th, 2008
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Well done, good sir!
February 24th, 2008
(1)
What I enjoyed most was the little bit you added to the story where the Dad and Little John start screaming. I always seem to crack up when I hear that.
February 24th, 2008
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im sick of these things. I'm pretty sure people just upload sh*tty stories to the internet on purpose just so they become popular among nerds across the net.
February 24th, 2008
(0)
so well done.
February 24th, 2008
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AMAZING!! A mix of epic music and stuff + dramatic reading.
February 24th, 2008
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Most definately a story of repercussions.
February 24th, 2008
(1)
Cerebral palsma
February 24th, 2008
(0)
wait not CrazyTaxi?
February 24th, 2008
(0)
This cracked me up, thanks for sharing this with us. Please make more :D
February 24th, 2008
(0)
god this is gold.
February 24th, 2008
(0)
I LOLED!
February 24th, 2008
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I can see "YOU ARE THE DEMONS" becoming the next internets viral catchphrase, ala "MY _______ IS PASTEDE ON YAY!"
February 25th, 2008
(2)
nobody knows what you're talking about you huge f*ggot
February 24th, 2008
(3)
This personifies every high-budget box-office failure ever
February 24th, 2008
(1)
oh man pure win
February 24th, 2008
(1)
You actually made this interesting... Legendary!
February 24th, 2008
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All these positive comments have been a huge self esteem boost in the area of audio production quality. Thanks to everyone!
February 26th, 2008
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The "radio" parts where by far the best audio work. "John was a space marine for...." was the best voice work.
February 28th, 2008
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You whered be a gud fan fikshen riter.
February 24th, 2008
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You have a nice voice
February 24th, 2008
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wtf.
February 24th, 2008
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You know, Peter's spelling and grammar is a lot better in this one and that sucks. Still, excellent production values.
February 25th, 2008
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What's the background song at "Then as he got oldered"? It sounds really familiar.
February 25th, 2008
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Music is from Roller Coaster Tycoon 3. One of my favorite soundtracks.
February 25th, 2008
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Ah, that's it. Many thanks man. Awesome site.
February 25th, 2008
(0)
You mean this post-grungy sounding tune? From Roller Coaster Tycoon 3? I sounds familiar to me too and I've never played Roller Coaster Tycoon 3. Sounds more like something from Starcraft.
February 25th, 2008
(0)
its ... called Gothic Moon... I was playing RCT3 yesterday
February 25th, 2008
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HAHAHAHAHA!!!
February 25th, 2008
(0)
Rock over London. Rock on, Chicago.
February 25th, 2008
(1)
john did 9/11
February 25th, 2008
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I usually don't listen to stuff like this because of how stupid it is but holy hell, that was hilarious! Kudos to you, my good sir.
February 25th, 2008
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Original is like 3x.
February 25th, 2008
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better. Also Palsma rifles and rocket missiles FTW!
February 25th, 2008
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sent shivers up my spine at the end. Talk about scary!!!!11111
February 25th, 2008
(0)
Awesome.
February 25th, 2008
(1)
O_O O_O O_O O_O O_O XD XD XD XD XD
February 26th, 2008
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We've missed you Asgard. ^_^ o_o ^_^ o_o ^.^ ^.^ ^.^!
February 25th, 2008
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How he spellt "repercussions" korrectly?
February 25th, 2008
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One of the most impressive works of audio I have ever heard.
February 25th, 2008
(1)
nice hl soundz
February 25th, 2008
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i was a space marine for 20 years myself, those demons are no joke.
February 25th, 2008
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zomg. I love it. Do that one about John Freeman!1!!
February 25th, 2008
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Reminds me of some juicy House of the Dead 1/2/3 dialogue. Nice.
February 25th, 2008
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Love the radio voice!
February 26th, 2008
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score
February 26th, 2008
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No,John you are the Pan!!!
February 26th, 2008
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Oh my GOD, this is an EPIC WIN.
February 26th, 2008
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OMG twist
February 26th, 2008
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This is truly an epic reading.
February 26th, 2008
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half-life sounds?
February 26th, 2008
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I was watching me and my momma, was in it watching this movie, this man kicked him, the man that was gonna try to punch him... he kicked him down on the ground he was gonna kick him while he was on the ground! you know what he did!? he kicked him in the penis....he was injured, injured bad
February 26th, 2008
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Wow i wish everybody in the world got this joke. this is f*ckin GOLD
February 26th, 2008
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Dude, if you don't become a voice actor, you're wasting your talent.
February 26th, 2008
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That really is an awesome complement, thank you. I do want to become a voice actor, I just need a place to enter into it... Sort of related: I'm going to go ahead and update my old blog again now.
February 26th, 2008
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Brilliant! Dramatic readings are the best. Nice step forward on these with the added effects.
February 26th, 2008
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This is a true milestone in literature. Never before have I seen such a well thought out and beatifully made work. Also, this story has the best plot twist in history. Simply amazing.
February 26th, 2008
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I updated my blog! http://captaincomedy.blogspot.com/
February 26th, 2008
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Awesome job narrating, but that ending is absolutely horrid :-p
February 26th, 2008
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Best job with a dramatic reading ever.
February 26th, 2008
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http://halosinspace.ytmnd.com/ lol these are great
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